The first summary we ever did was about desert police patrols; basically it talked about how desert horsemen work to keep a safe environment. Mr. Hedley was kind enough to guide us and give us tips on how to summarize each paragraph. The most important thing was to try to get the main ideas and omit the names and the quotations and to look at the openings and closings of the paragraphs.
The second summary was about road crashes, it talked mainly about children's safety and how parents play a big role when it comes to their children's safety. Mr. Hedley here showed us how to use different words and statistics in the sentences and how to again focus on the main ideas; some mistakes were corrected by Mr. Hedley and were sent back to us for review and correction; this summary was graded 10 percent from our overall grade.
coming on to our third summary which was about pearl diving; in this summary it talked about how pearl diving in the U.A.E may be gone but certainly wouldn't be forgotten and the different attempts to recreate the authentic diving experiences. In this summary Mr. Hedley explained how we should be focusing on names and dates which was pretty much straightforward.
The second summary was about road crashes, it talked mainly about children's safety and how parents play a big role when it comes to their children's safety. Mr. Hedley here showed us how to use different words and statistics in the sentences and how to again focus on the main ideas; some mistakes were corrected by Mr. Hedley and were sent back to us for review and correction; this summary was graded 10 percent from our overall grade.
coming on to our third summary which was about pearl diving; in this summary it talked about how pearl diving in the U.A.E may be gone but certainly wouldn't be forgotten and the different attempts to recreate the authentic diving experiences. In this summary Mr. Hedley explained how we should be focusing on names and dates which was pretty much straightforward.